My Weekend 我的周末写作

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My Weekend 我的周末

让我们再来复习一下写好一篇作文必须做到哪些步骤:xiao84.com

1. 审清作文题目 有哪些要求?哪些时态?人称?
2. 确定文章类型 记叙?说明?议论?看图?应用?
3. 确定文章时态 单一? 混合?
4. 头脑风暴 发散思维
5. 写下关键 字,词,句 主题相关字,词,句,句型
6. 列出提纲和段落 并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接
7. 根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键字词句完成文章
8. 写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色 人称时态单复数一致等 运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来使文章更为地道,通顺,纯正。

My Weekend 我的周末

1. What do you think of your weekend? Use at least two adjectives to describe your weekend.
2. Tell your reasons
3. Show at least two main activities you often do.

结合本篇文章,我们可以这样尝试写作:

1. 审题:

本文第一小问是:你认为你的周末怎么样。应该用一般时回答。而且要用至少两个形容词来形容你感受到的周末。
本文第二小问是:说出你这么认为的理由。解释为什么感受到你的周末是这样的。应该用一般时回答。因为这些都是经常性的动作和感受,所以是用一般时来说明理由。
本文第三小问是:举例至少两件你经常做的主要活动来进一步支持阐述以上理由。必须用一般时来写。但在写具体参与了什么活动时可以有过去时。

2. 确定文章类型: 这是一篇议论文而且是夹叙夹议。因此,在题材上要符合议论文的特点。但在举例时也可以有记叙文的特色。

3. 确定文章时态:根据审题,我们可以确定这篇文章可以是单一时态(一般时)也可以是混合时态(一般时及过去时混合)的文章。在写作时要注意时态的转换和变化。

4. 头脑风暴 发散思维: 一般来讲,头脑风暴有两种形式。一种是太阳发散型。另一种是竹节递进型。太阳发散型是从一个点想到很多相关的联系。我的周末这篇文章就可以先用太阳发散型头脑风暴。比如:我的周末可以让我想到轻松,愉快,忙碌,无聊,充实,累人的,很棒等等一系列的形容词。而竹节递进型的头脑风暴是从一点出发,层层递进,不断深化和推导的过程。如:从我的周末让我感到很轻松可以想到我在周末一直可以出去郊游。在郊游的过程中,我可以接触大自然,放松身心等。这就是一个层层递进的逻辑关系。很多时候这两种方法是有机地结合在一起同时使用的。这篇文章就可以这样结合起来运用。同学们可以在平时写作时多加注意和使用。

5. 写下关键 字,词,句 主题相关字,词,句,句型:

主题相关核心关键字:

feel, happy, relaxing, exciting, enjoyable, boring, tiresome, wonderful, super, meaningful, helpful, tough, pleasant, busy, stressful, free, terrible, necessary, unnecessary, dull, important, comfortable, warm, cool, fun, nice, colorful, energetic,

主题相关核心关键词:

full of fun, as busy as a bee, have tutorial lessons, have extra lessons, go to night schools,play computer games, go for a walk in the park, do some exercises, play the pinao,play basketball, go swimming, do sth. interesting, go shopping, relax myself, read boks, go to the cinema, have a picnic, look forward, go sightseeing, have a big dinner at a nice restaurant, would rather, prefer doing sth, too…to, would like to do, so … that…,lucky enough, not only…but also…, not…until, as…as…possible, be willing to do sth.,in my daily life, sounds great, try one’s best, feel good,not only wonderful but also meaningful, Although…, (still)….

主题相关核心关键句:

It seems that…( we always have very busy and tiresome weekend.)
It is pity that …(we still have to do a lot of homework during the weekends.)
It is reported that …(2/3 of the students would rather stay at home during the weekends.)
It’s time for sb. to…(go outside and breath some fresh air.)
I would like to …(spend my free time in reading books.)
What fun it is to …(do something interesting!)
It takes sb. st to do sth. (It takes me a whole day to have extra lessons.)
It’s common knowledge that…(students today hardly have too little spare time.)
As the old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
That is to say,… (everyone needs certain opportunity to fully relax themselves.)
I am willing to ... (enjoy my wonderful time with my friends.)
As the result, …(we can’t study well in the following week.)
I am looking forward to …, (having this kind of ideal weekend.)
As far as I concerned, …(weekend is a good chance for us to relax ourselves.)
What’s more, …(having a barbecue with family members is truly unforgetable.)
It goes without saying that…(a nice weekend can make us happy and energetic.)
On the other hand, …(as a student, we hardly have any time to relax ourselves.)
In a word, …(we all need a proper way to relax ourselves during the weekends.)
I am looking forward to every one of my weekend.

6. 列出提纲和段落 并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接:

一般初中阶段的文章建议使用三段式。第一段通常为总起句。说明自己的观点或立场。也可以是一件事情的开端。第二段为全篇的主要内容。主要是要把自己的观点立场或事情的经过充分展开,阐述清楚。最后一段为总结段。要起到呼应,提升,点题的作用。这三段式的文章也能很好地符合文章中三小文的惯例。

本文第一段可以开门见山,直接表明自己的观点:用两个形容词来形容自己的周末。

第二段可以详细按照问题讲述我的周末是怎么样的。并且给出一两个例子。

第三段可以说明为什么喜欢帮助别人。帮助别人自己的感受等作为结尾。

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