This afternoon, we play a game called ‘Family Tree’. This game is very interesting. I’m very interested in it. Our teacher’s family is very large. She has many brothers and sisters. But I am unlucky, I has only a sister and I without brothers. But I think I have the best parents in the world. They are very friendly to me. I live in a good family. My grand parents loves me, too. When they buy meat, they will give the best parts of the meat to me.
When I was a child, I can’t undertand them. I want to have bread. My grand father took a bike to Qu Tang. Because in our village there is no ‘bread house’. Qu Tang is far from our village. Now I grow up. I understand them when I think of this things. I will cry I can’t use words to say I love them.
I love my family!
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翻译:
今天下午,我们玩了一个游戏叫做“家谱”,这个游戏很有趣。我觉得非常有趣。我们老师的家是非常庞大的,她有兄弟组妹。但我是不幸的,我仅有一个妹妹并没有弟弟。但我觉得我有全世界最好的父母。他们对我非常好,我有一个好的的家庭,我的父母也很爱我,当他们买肉,他们会把最好的给我吃。
当我还很小的时候,我不理解他们。我想要吃面包,我的伟大的父亲骑车去Qu Tang.因为在我们乡村这里没有面包房。qu tang离我们村庄很远,现在我长大了,我明白了他们为我为我想要的事,我感到愧疚,无法用言语表达我爱他们。
我爱我的家人。